[Right Here!] How is the copy on this site?

Discussion in 'Copywriting' started by Ludovic, Aug 15, 2011.

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    Website URL: http://www.plrmegamart.com

    Please let me know what you think! The good, the bad...revisions/suggestions?

    Thank you!
     
    Ludovic, Aug 15, 2011 IP
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    Its a bit simplistic, apparently the current status quo with regards to copywriting is 'the more the better'. But overall, i think you have managed to draw out your message in an appropriate way. Nothing too fluffy but at the same time loaded with enough benefits to incentivise action on your offer.

    One thing though: The 'As seen on' columns look kind of suspicious if you don't have direct links to those sites.For example,it will look like you are merely asserting an association with a higher website for commercial reasons without really being affiliated with them. But thats just my opinion.
     
    Discoverizon, Aug 15, 2011 IP