Reviewing my Design

Discussion in 'Design' started by Muhammad Qasim, Aug 26, 2013.

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What do you say about this design ?

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    535717_355916854521416_1208596431_n.jpg I decided i wanted to start reviewing my design :D
    What do you think ? 535717_355916854521416_1208596431_n.jpg
     
    Muhammad Qasim, Aug 26, 2013 IP
  2. scurvy

    scurvy Well-Known Member

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    what are these??
     
    scurvy, Aug 27, 2013 IP
  3. robbydeletter

    robbydeletter Well-Known Member

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    #3
    Give us a little more info plz?
     
    robbydeletter, Aug 27, 2013 IP
  4. Muhammad Qasim

    Muhammad Qasim Member

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    #4
    These are cards in different style

    Dear These are cards
     
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    Muhammad Qasim, Aug 27, 2013 IP
  5. tmh2k1

    tmh2k1 Peon

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    not a bad concept but the circles go a bit too far out which may give you problems in certain applications. And the colors need tweaking. One of the words is missing an "o" lol. And one of the Fs is touching another letter. Alignment in teh letters is way off in certain areas too. Needs a good amount of work
     
    tmh2k1, Aug 29, 2013 IP
  6. Muhammad Qasim

    Muhammad Qasim Member

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    Thanks for point out !!
     
    Muhammad Qasim, Sep 6, 2013 IP
  7. tzemp

    tzemp Active Member

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    I might looking at doing a subtle gradient on the orange background to help it stand out more, other than that it looks very nice.
     
    tzemp, Sep 13, 2013 IP
  8. shiv saroya

    shiv saroya Active Member

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    Design is good,,, but you can change this word,,,"Powerfull"
     
    shiv saroya, Oct 24, 2013 IP
  9. monkeye

    monkeye Active Member

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    Hi Muhammad,
    It's not consistent across the products.
    In the first one "o" is missing, in the second one "f" is touching "e".
    Of the three, CD's is probably the better looking.
     
    monkeye, Oct 31, 2013 IP
  10. Red Shield

    Red Shield Active Member

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    I Agree.., you need to make the "logo" consistent..,
    and for the white card background., maybe you can try gradient from 10% black - white, and add orange - yellow stroke? :)
     
    Red Shield, Oct 31, 2013 IP