Okay, tear this squeeze page apart. It's for a client of mine. (The opt-in form is not active). http://www.seminar-marketing-secrets.com/squeeze.htm Thanks!
Well. I would say that your page is not readable at all. I highly recommend you to read "The Non-Designers Design Book" which can be easily found on the web.
Well, I think it's ok for that purpose although it does not really look professional. However, if you are selling those products, then you will have alot of work to be done.