Review This One-Page Website

Discussion in 'Websites' started by nvidura, Sep 17, 2012.

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  1. #1
    Hi Dpears,

    I just finished deploying http://www.advancebaggage.asia/welcome.abs website. Its only a 1 page website. I cannot add any more content, But I can rewrite anything. I need this page to be in top search results for 5 specific keywords. Your ideas are most welcome.

    Thanks and Cheers!
     
    nvidura, Sep 17, 2012 IP
  2. Ashley Sally

    Ashley Sally Member

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    #2
    On Page Factore of your website
    1. Rewrite advancebaggage.asia/welcome.abs this to home page like domain.com or advancebaggage.asia
    2. Add Unique and Fresh content on your website
    3. Put H1 on your Main Keyword
    4. For complete SEO releated your Website contact me PM me or call direct ahtishamseo at gmail
     
    Ashley Sally, Sep 17, 2012 IP
  3. pisarek

    pisarek Peon

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    1. I would suggest you to change the font within the header section.
    2. You should consider more professional logo design ;)
    3. I think you could try some infographics in the 'how it works section' instead on plain text
     
    pisarek, Sep 17, 2012 IP
  4. Only1James

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    I agree with this. Also there are big gaps inbetween content on that page which you could look into reducing. For a dark colored background your should i look in to making your fonts bigger. Cheers
     
    Only1James, Sep 17, 2012 IP
  5. nvidura

    nvidura Well-Known Member

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    Thank you guys for all valuable reviews and index page tips. I will surely try to rewrite this and post you updates. By the way i have a very good news. I deployed my site yesterday. But in less than 12 hours, that site is in Google index. Did not posted its' URl any ware or never had chance to promoted it. This is the only link i posted. WOW.
     
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    nvidura, Sep 17, 2012 IP
  6. Chloe Thomas

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    #6
    the layout is a bit blan. you should include more text content.
     
    Chloe Thomas, Sep 18, 2012 IP
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    i see lots of wasted space in between the contents... not good for user experience and SEO as well...
     
    brrainso, Sep 18, 2012 IP
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    Hi firstly I think you should change your website colour to white as it signify professional look. Instead of navigation tab you why not you add the buttons all in the website I can bet it will look even more professional. Your content is good in my opinion. Design is alright.
     
    nav123, Sep 18, 2012 IP
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    #9
    Suggest you to make more than one page....
     
    Fastolph, Sep 21, 2012 IP
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    #10
    Slow loading, bad choice in graphics, needs a lot of work
     
    mahtlaw, Sep 21, 2012 IP
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    I think you should rather choose a bright design than a black page, and optimise your website to make it faster because currently it's slow .
     
    RoundShots, Sep 23, 2012 IP
  12. nvidura

    nvidura Well-Known Member

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    Thank You guys for all your thoughts and ideas, I will try to split this one page into 5 separate pages and will let you know the results.
     
    nvidura, Sep 26, 2012 IP
  13. sigmainfo

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    It is actually nice.

    Top banner image in flash is too big. Make it bit small.

    Also, what i find missed is a "Form Filling Part". I am sure if you had this mini website then you must be going to promote your services using this page and when a person will visit the page then for sure, if he/she shows interest then they can just fill up a form showing interest.
     
    sigmainfo, Sep 26, 2012 IP