Loading time is good but you need to work on entire design to make attractive.There are some better themes in internet where you can download freely or you can create your own design with the help of them.Will be cool if you decorate the site with attractive design and color schemes.Thanks for sharing..
I think it is a good starting point. The graphics could be a little more attention grabbing but that is something you can play with. I would like to see an example of a cloaked link and how it works, maybe a step by step process with the end result. I also think you could add a testimonial or two or three to establish credibility and how much users like the product. I think it's great you took action and the site is up and running, now all you have to do is tweak it. Good Luck!