Review Site

Discussion in 'Websites' started by kizza, Aug 26, 2008.

  1. #1
    Hello.

    Firstly I'd like to say I'm a noob at web design and I have spent all today trying to learn a bit of flash to make it look good, but it still doesn't seem to fit together.

    I just need general help with making the design look nice (then I can move onto coding the rest).

    NOTE: I'm just looking for a review on the visual appearance of the site, the functionality isn't really built in except for the scrolling flash bit.

    Finally we get to it, my URL: www.revisemenow.com/as

    Try not to be too harsh :p But constructive criticism is appreciated.
     
    kizza, Aug 26, 2008 IP
  2. NsaneNoob

    NsaneNoob Peon

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    Are you kidding me, for a first time it looks amazing. What doesn't look good and does not fit in terms of quality is the moving rectangle where you go left and right at the bottom. The icons are very low in details and doesn't really seem to fit. But whats on the top of that, looks very professional.
     
    NsaneNoob, Aug 26, 2008 IP
  3. bobbylove321

    bobbylove321 Active Member

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    Fantastic!!! However, the designs at the bottom need to be more crystal clear.
     
    bobbylove321, Aug 26, 2008 IP
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    zyklon Active Member

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    for 1st time, amazing! all i would suggest is less whitespace.
     
    zyklon, Aug 26, 2008 IP
  5. ISLACANELA

    ISLACANELA Peon

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    #5
    Ok this is my review i am a surfer not a techie.

    LOVE THE LOOK OF THE SITE!!!! WELL DONE.

    I surf sites alot and if i came across this one i would want to play with it.

    Not sure if your doing some admin at the moment but i couldnt get beyond the home page but as far as design is concerned...its fab!!

    Sarah
     
    ISLACANELA, Aug 27, 2008 IP
  6. PaulApostu

    PaulApostu Greenhorn

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    Nice work, but i saw 2 minor mistkes at your logo. In the text reviseMEnow'tm, improve the text quality of the ME and tm text parts. :)
     
    PaulApostu, Aug 27, 2008 IP
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    #7
    That's an awesome first design
     
    simonspurr, Aug 27, 2008 IP
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    #8
    Awesome work, add some content there.
     
    sweetdreamz, Aug 27, 2008 IP
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    domainc Peon

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    #9
    very good design. the empty space above footer should be removed
     
    domainc, Aug 27, 2008 IP
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    This site really looks good. My only recommendation would be to increase the size of the font.
     
    metrisoft, Aug 27, 2008 IP
  11. kizza

    kizza Peon

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    kizza, Aug 27, 2008 IP
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    stacman Banned

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    #12
    im getting php errors.
     
    stacman, Aug 28, 2008 IP
  13. goldeylou

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    I tried the new link and I too am getting errors great design though. Love the scroll bar from the new link and the master of GCSE and timetable slidey things!
     
    goldeylou, Aug 28, 2008 IP