Review site please...

Discussion in 'Websites' started by quatto, Sep 24, 2010.

  1. #1
    Site is only a week or two old. It is the first of 5 blogs I plan to build. This one is my hobby and passion, so it is gonna be easy to blog about it.

    I need a critique from the user experience to the ads to the seo...

    The good and the bad...

    Thanks

    TrainingBJJ.com
     
    quatto, Sep 24, 2010 IP
  2. distinctly

    distinctly Greenhorn

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    #2
    Design-wise the site looks good. A couple of things that you could improve though -

    Get a couple more keywords in the page title of your homepage
    I normally have the homepage as a static page and not just showing the latest blog posts. You can then optimise the text for certain keywords
     
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    distinctly Greenhorn

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    #3
    Just got your PM.

    Are you using Wordpress? If so I can tell you how to make the homepage static.

    With it's current setting, the homepage just displays your recent posts, which will contain a mixture of keywords and topics. By having a static page you can ensure that the content is always optimised for the keywords you are targetting.
     
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  4. quatto

    quatto Peon

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    Yes, wordpress...If I make the page static, wouldn't I have less content on my home page? At this point I would have none, quite frankly...but yes I understand what you are saying and any suggestions are greatly appreciated.
     
    quatto, Sep 24, 2010 IP
  5. distinctly

    distinctly Greenhorn

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    Just write a new page of content and set it as the homepage. Something along the lines of 'Welcome to xxxxxx
     
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    nice desing i live the concept
     
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  7. quatto

    quatto Peon

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    Gotcha, but then I would have to add some sort of "latest posts" section or something like that to get them "into" the site correct?
     
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    ApocalypseXL Notable Member

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    You need some kind of logo . It looks empty and the ads and the right menu make me feel that I'm just squeezed in to buy something . The content will need some formating as well . Right now it looks like a badly executed ad .
     
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    #9
    My first thought is too many ads - I'd have thought your bounce rate is likely to be quite high - especially with that banner ad floating in the header are, just a bit too much I'd say personally. Less is more, sometimes.

    I agree with other replies, that it would benefit from a header logo. The more you can do to fill visitors with confidence that they've reached a site which is likely to be relevant for what they're searching for - the better, and also, the less a site just looks like a blog full of ads, the better also.

    If it were me, I would strip out all banner ads, and just focus attentions on the affiliate link within each post.

    Cheers

    Kev
     
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  10. quatto

    quatto Peon

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    Thanks for the advice so far...and I know I am lacking a logo, I am just not sure what to do abou a logo...don't want to pay for a logo right now...so I am trying to think of different solutions.
     
    quatto, Sep 24, 2010 IP
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    Yeah, a logo would be good. Try and design one yourself, it really isn't that hard
     
    distinctly, Sep 24, 2010 IP
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    Great, i like. Now i couldn't post. everyone, could you view my site also? and give me some advise. thank you all in advance
     
    5thluxury, Sep 27, 2010 IP
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    #13
    Design-wise the site looks good.
     
    xiji, Sep 30, 2010 IP
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    #14
    Site is good. Take some time in the meta tag.
     
    ibanezgrx1, Sep 30, 2010 IP
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    #15
    looks pretty neat, looks a bit squashed though, perhaps you could widen the page width a bit
     
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    Looks better then the last time , a whole lot better . Keep improving it .
     
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    #17
    Nice site, but I never like so much white color. Maybe you could try playing with the background color a little and see how it looks.
     
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    #18
    Design is looking good you should add more content to your site to make it more attractive and add more images
     
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    The design is perfect
     
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  20. quatto

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    #20
    Any suggestions on a subtle background color that still makes the black text stand out and goes with the red I have chosen?

    Yes, you are right. I am just hesistant to add "filler" images for no reason. And the content, I am slowly adding day by day. any suggestions would be great...
     
    quatto, Oct 1, 2010 IP