Review site I made for client

Discussion in 'Websites' started by Clear Presence Media, Apr 18, 2008.

  1. #1
    Hey

    Looking for some critique and some advice on how to make my recent client's site convert better...or any other design tip...

    www.unloadyourgold.com

    thanks
     
    Clear Presence Media, Apr 18, 2008 IP
  2. NsaneNoob

    NsaneNoob Peon

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    #2
    Simple and clean but does not look too modern though.
     
    NsaneNoob, Apr 18, 2008 IP
  3. Clear Presence Media

    Clear Presence Media Well-Known Member

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    Do you think it will convert well?
     
    Clear Presence Media, Apr 18, 2008 IP
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    #4
    I couldn't say whether I think it'll convert well. Design-wise, I'd recommend you have a heading for each page to let visitors know what page they're on. Good luck.
     
    bwebb, Apr 18, 2008 IP
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    sydneyaus Active Member

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    It always make me laugh, scrap gold. Just bin it mate it's only scrap gold. You found a good niche which could make you good money, especially now with the price of gold sky rocketing. Template looks fine but maybe you should use a bigger lettertype. Good Luck.
     
    sydneyaus, Apr 19, 2008 IP
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    tigrrra Well-Known Member

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    #6
    site looks good simple and to the point. I'm curious how well this will convert
     
    tigrrra, Apr 19, 2008 IP
  7. ddave

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    Design tips,

    1) Replace the blue background. It kinds of make it look cheap.

    2) You need a new logo, a more professional one that is.

    3) Your navigation is too flat. Looks like it needs a button or something behind it. Especially noticeable with the live help - does not seem like a link but only text.

    Just my humble opinion :)
     
    ddave, Apr 19, 2008 IP
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    agree about logo and type is way too small for my eyes
     
    john247, Apr 19, 2008 IP
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    I also agree about the size of type, just a little to small for the average reader.
    YOU might also change to lime green color to a more appealing green.
     
    mcfall2008, Apr 19, 2008 IP
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    #10
    The color choices are not too good, need less saturation. It's too "bright", makes it look cheap (think plastic toy). Esp. the blue background either needs to get toned down or dropped altogether. The typography is lacking as well. To reiterate what people are saying, font-size is too small, line-height is too small, and it's not varied. Other than that, site is fine.
     
    astoever, Apr 19, 2008 IP
  11. Electro-Host

    Electro-Host Well-Known Member

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    I find the website perfect to be honest. Very informative but the text is quite small. Might want to change the size.
     
    Electro-Host, Apr 19, 2008 IP
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    Looks pretty good but the font is kinda small and on the computer I'm using there is tons of blue space on both sides.
     
    flashgordonweb, Apr 19, 2008 IP
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    It would not convert me either.... Why all the blank space in the middle column under the hand? Text is a little small for me and you need a larger, catchier header.

    Make it easy to identify exactly what your site is about within just a second or two of landing on it.
     
    swedal, Apr 19, 2008 IP
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    #14
    It needs more picture of people holding money.
     
    mister_doodi, Apr 19, 2008 IP