===>Review Salespage - Tell me what you think...

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by ludovic115, Dec 19, 2009.

  1. #1
    Hi guys,

    I just have a thing for asking questions all the time regarding a topic. Even, if I were a high authority in a field, I would still ask questions... With the many copywriting talents that differentiate throughout this forum, I would like to know, if anyone can offer suggestions to my salespage.

    It would be mostly appreciated.

    Thanks, and all the best
    -Ludovic

    Salespage ===> Private Label Rights
     
    ludovic115, Dec 19, 2009 IP
  2. intellg

    intellg Well-Known Member

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    You should make affiliate in your sales page with good offers.
     
    intellg, Dec 19, 2009 IP
  3. ludovic115

    ludovic115 Peon

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    what do you mean?
     
    ludovic115, Dec 19, 2009 IP
  4. zeekstern

    zeekstern Active Member

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    Nothing wrong with the sales page. Graphics are good, sales pitch is good, real real long, but good.

    In fact, it looks like it was written by a professional. Kinda like the same "professional" that you advertise on the sales page itself. You know, the part where you tell the people "What's Inside Our PLR eBook Club". ;)

    In any case, the only concern that you might want to look into is with the new FTC regulations. For example, the try it now for $4.95. If there will be a charge billed to your credit card after the 14 days, you need to state that on your landing page (not the sales page). Also your 100%guarantee is for 60 days. This doesn't jive with the 14 days and will confuse the public. As you probably already know, this is the type of confusion the FTC is trying to eliminate. Also, you might want to check out your testimonials with regards to the FTC stuff. I don't remember it off hand, but something makes me think yours might be a problem. You can look it up faster than me:))

    Good luck with your product..
     
    zeekstern, Dec 19, 2009 IP