Review Request for my First Squidoo Lens Attempt

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    Hello everyone,

    I am a little on creating a Squidoo lens. It is somethig I have been planning to do for a long time and I finally got around to it yesterday.

    My Lens is at Ghost Stories on Squidoo

    I would appreciate any feedback as to how it looks and what I can do to improve it
     
    kentuckyslone, Sep 5, 2008 IP
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    remoradea Banned

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    It looks good, I like it. You got some interesting stories in there.

    It's quite much free space on the right column, can you fill it up a bit?
     
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    Hey thanks for checking it out and posting your thoughts about it.

    Actually, you dont control what appears in the right column, Squidoo does that.
     
    kentuckyslone, Sep 14, 2008 IP
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    Yes, I tought of that but didn't know it for shure, so I asked.

    Anyway, how about that blue titles on the light blue background? In that area you have low contrast items. Can that be modified?
     
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    wow...Nice idea. I think you'll be No:-1 in squidoo lens...
     
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    Well thank you very much for such a kind comment, I appreciate that.

    Actually the lens ranked 184 in its category on Sept 6 (one day after it was created), then on the 9th it was at 130 and now today it is #52.

    However, overall it is currently ranked at 1,112 (it started out at 675,446). I am new to Squidoo but I feel like that is fairly good for a lens that has only been up for about 9 days.
     
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