I started a similar thread last week, but it was removed. Now I believe I'm within the rules...thanks to the people who posted in it; please do so again... www.ClearSkinSecrets.com is the site. I took a lot of input from the board regarding the pace and flow of my copy; let me know what you think of the results. Of course, I designed everything with affiliate conversions in mind. I would love it if some of you health & acne niche webmasters gave Clear Skin Secrets a spin on your pages, so... I'M GIVING A $20 BONUS to any and every affiliate who sells 20 copies of Clear Skin Secrets by April 22, 2010. www.ClearSkinSecrets.com/affiliates.php Thanks!
Nice graphics...BUT...your headline does not give any benefit why the reader should scroll down. Also, the background with the faces is a nice idea...but it distracts from your sales letter and you do NOT want this. Give more me reasons why I should buy this - that is aside from the photos. Videos are also ok. The quote from Slate should also be redisigned. I'm not trying to spank you here Chris but this market is VERY competitive. You need to get your ducks in the row and that is ALL of them. Good luck!
Looks nice. The only thing is your video is not working when I tried to play it. The advice I can say is to test it first and let the market decided if your website looks good or not. From What I can tell it looks good though. But again I would suggest to test first. Have you been testing already? If so, what are your conversion rates?
Thanks for the great feedback, guys. I took a lot of your advice, especially from MoritzB. You can see the changes now. I noticed that the video is hanging in Firefox. It plays in IE. This is an issue with LF's magical config file. Thanks for pointing it out T.J., I'll get it fixed right away. More comments are welcome and appreciated! Affiliates, don't forget to visit ClearSkinSecrets.com/affiliates.php. EDIT: Fixed - The video loads and play perfectly in Firefox & IE.
Just gave your product a test run and had two sales with fewer than 110 clicks. Whatever you changed on your page definitely helped, because this thing is converting like mad.
Nice work, falafelfro! I'm adding a blog and improving the checkout buttons based on tips I've gotten from other top-performing sites, so hopefully you'll be seeing even more sales soon.
WOw, awesome! I should put this product on one of my niche sites. It may go well there. @Ispublish1: can I contact you when I put it up for your advice since I am newer to selling ebooks? Thanks!
But of course I'm going to post a Keyword Elite-generated list of keywords on my affiliate page as well, so feel free to check that out.