Review recycling blog

Discussion in 'Websites' started by powell, Jun 14, 2009.

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    http://www.irecyclegreen.com

    Please review my site, been up since Jan 23 of this year. All content is unique and was purchased, though no new content has been added for a bit.
     
    powell, Jun 14, 2009 IP
  2. DianeS55

    DianeS55 Peon

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    I am a native speaker of English and I would not stay on your page past the first sentence.

    "The technology has led to many gadgets being a part of daily lives. Though there is sentimental value attached to them, after a period of their permanent damage, they are unscrupulously disposed off."

    Here is one example of how a native English speaker would state the above content

    Technology has given us many gadgets useful to our daily lives. Even though we become a bit sentimental about these electronic wonders, they all have a limited life and when they no longer work they are simply discarded without much thought.

    It is a shame you paid money for content that is so obviously written by a non-native English speaker. But if your site is making money, I guess there is no problem? Only you can be the judge on that.
     
    DianeS55, Jun 16, 2009 IP
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    very nice site to look at.
     
    custompilotshirts, Jun 16, 2009 IP
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    poor quality desaign, you can make a logo simbol or something that describe the "green" it self, not waste to much green color on your site, and man.....you dont have any footer, why dont you make some
     
    odienk, Jun 17, 2009 IP
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    nice template.. not very descriptive of the site
     
    financeking113, Jun 18, 2009 IP
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    Though I am not a native speaker, the contents need to be improved.
     
    sakto, Jun 18, 2009 IP