Review on my Hubpages

Hi Friends kindly review on my Hub pages, and discuss me how to improve quality of these post.

1. Apple iPhone 5 - an Overview, Specification and Features can this post is Useful or not.
2. Samsung Galaxy S III - An Overview with updated Price can this post is informative or not.

 

i like your work but still there is big room in improvements.

 

hi.

Seems the work of yours did not match our expectations.
You work is not quite good. But it doesnt mean that i dont like it.
I want you to work on all stuffs there and do it seriously. Dont hesitate to ask some questions to others.
Good luck!