My website is under heavy construction. But whats your opinion on http://www.uk-water-coolers.com All comments welcome, Many thanks
No need to repeat words in your title tag - make the title tag for each page the number one keyphrase you hope to target. You have 3 links per page to your site map and other pages. I didn't look at every page put I am not sure you even need a site map because every page already has a link to every other page. You should use only one H1 tag per page, utilize h2-3-4 tags where it makes sense. Write content that makes sense - "If a child is poorly hydrated your mental performance and learning ablility is adversely affected." <sarcasm, sorry>Huh? I guess so, if my kid is suffering the effects of dehydration my mental performance and learning ability may suffer...</sarcasm> Write content for the visitor. Write content people would want to link to!
very clean site. i know you stated it's under construction. just make sure you include that 'contact' image on the left in every page. i clicked on a few links that did not have that. also, you have a lot of open white space on every page BUT the index page, try to utilize it with some more content.