Review of copywriting website

Please review my latest website for a client who is a copywriter - http://www.tallpoppycopywriting.com.au.

 

hmmm. i'l do some copywrite and let you know.

 

i'l do some copywrite

 

IMO, the site is a little cheezy. But for the copywriting client, you might want to get rid of the punctuation errors. That's important for business.

 

Thanks for the feedback. That design is what they wanted so that is what they got. I'll get them to go through the website and check their spelling.

 

I didn't really see a problem with spelling. I saw a problem with the punctuation.

 

Nice. It would be more nice if you consider some other color than red. Red background creates problem for reading the content.

 

Line space it too tight. Copy is cluttered, using a Quill says to me they are in the dark ages.

 

For a Copywriting service, there should be better copy.

The headline is the first thing that I see and "Unique Buying Advantage" is not convincing me of anything. I almost left after seeing that because it gave me no reason to stay. Use something like "Increase Sales with Our Writing". Below that should be testimonials or case studies. " 'Tall Poppy increased our sales by 35%!' signed xyz company" Get those up as fast as possible and the sales will sky rocket. Everyone who is looking for a business service wants to see proof of what you can do and testimonials.

 

Thanks for the input. I'll get the client to write a more compelling copy with some testimonials.