Review of "cause" website

hi,
i create this website as a bit of a "cause" website...

www.godteens.com

i was just wondering what everyone thought of the website? design/concept?

thanks
tom

 

I think the design is okay, what I would do is make the header/photograph in your content area lighter because it looks to harsh against everything else.

 

ok...i see what you mean..ill look into it when i have some free time..thanks!

 

I wouldn't center all the text. Headers are OK but not all of the text. I'd justify the paragraphs

 

I would not accept the centered text, it makes it harder to read the content

the top right scroll is too fast

 

I would add a structure based on css to the content.

 

Your design is very simple , very much white on your page. I think you can add a border for the table / div that contains all the information. Also , that part with those results moving up it`s too fast for any one to read. The logo is basic and nice.

Good luck with your site,
Dks.

 

nice,clean page but you need more colors.design is too simple now.

 

Most probably your intentions are the best ones, but the people should know why they are asked to give away their personal data to someone, it would be nice to place a clear statement about it somewhere near the form.

There is a typo in your page also.

then => than

 

alrite seems pretti basic.the page layout doesnt realli seem to flow,which is a bad thing.

 

thanks for all the input...
i am working on a totally new design to try and work with what you have suggested.

 

hey,
i have totally reworked the design, and i think it is now a lot cleaner, and more professional. If you could provide your opinions again it would be greatly appreciated.

thanks