Review my Writing

Hi,

I would like to know your opinion on my writing skill, I have tried my best though I am not a native English speaker.

Here is my post ;-
https://www.digesst.com/where-to-buy-dry-ice/

Note:- The site belong to me.

 

You did good man. There were a few words you could have added that would have made it a tad bit easier to read, however as you stated you are not a "native English speaker". The point is-- you made your point, gave valuable information and came across as an authority on the subject ! Well Done..

 

I think you have done a good job. Your writing skills will start to improve when you begin to blog every day. And for that, you need to expand your vocabulary, read regularly and improve your grammar.

 

Good job my friend! For a non-native English speaker your article was very informative.

Although I did find it a bit too "keyword stuffed" for my liking, but I guess you are also going for SEO writing, so I understand where you're coming from.

As for grammar, there are a few words that broke the flow of reading. But overall, not bad.

My main suggestion for you is to have someone (a native English speaker) read your articles out loud to you, so you can hear where they get "hung up" on any of the sentences. Then you can adjust it before posting it live.

 

Great, I like read articles non native speakers, because they open describing world wiith simple words, it's like fairytale, all the rest you have to open yourself in your mind.

 

Like you, im not a native English speaker but I find you did a brilliant job.