Review my work [pixel art]

Discussion in 'Graphics & Multimedia' started by mzonas, Jul 14, 2009.

  1. #1
    Hello. Originally I am programmer but I found my second talent not that long ago. Please note that images a very small.

    This is the list of item (from left to right):

    I was always fan of TMNT.Raphael's sai;
    Just a small sword icon;
    3 axes: normal axe, double axe and fire axe;
    3 katanas: normal katana, double katana and ice katana;
    A reaper;
    Michaelangelo's nunchaku (but the different colour and in my personal opinion my best drawn item);
    2 potion: small potion and huge potion (nicer one);
    2 finished items: Boots and axe:

    [​IMG]
     
    mzonas, Jul 14, 2009 IP
  2. johnhinds

    johnhinds Active Member

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    Hey those are really neat! They could be used as icons for a video game. Good job! The only suggestion that I might have is to add a bit more shading to the objects. They look pretty good as is too.
     
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  3. mzonas

    mzonas Well-Known Member

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    Thanks. Shading is not a problem. I think I willl add shading and post new ones.
     
    mzonas, Jul 15, 2009 IP
  4. KingQub3d

    KingQub3d Peon

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    #4
    oh man. those are lovely... if you could code... and design well you could make a pixelated game :)
     
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  5. Onlinesupplies

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    #5
    Not bad at all mate, but as others have said they could do with some more shading in places :)
     
    Onlinesupplies, Jul 15, 2009 IP
  6. mzonas

    mzonas Well-Known Member

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    I am attaching my newest picture. What about the shading?
     

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  7. fadetoblack22

    fadetoblack22 Well-Known Member

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    #7
    Good, it looks much more modern now :)
     
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  8. juani

    juani Peon

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    #8
    hhaa this is so atari-ish :p
     
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  9. zoogo

    zoogo Peon

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    #9
    You're starting off well but your technique and style have a long way to develop.

    IMO you should focus your creativity in other places because like the poster above me mentions, pixel art is dying and old.

    But in any case do what you love..
     
    zoogo, Jul 15, 2009 IP
  10. AudreyP

    AudreyP Guest

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    #10
    You can actually use them as an icon to anything
    Since you are a programmer you can make them as an icon
    to your programming work especially when you are using Visual Basic 6.0
     
    AudreyP, Jul 15, 2009 IP
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    #11
    gud job dude..
     
    yodayoz, Aug 5, 2009 IP
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    Seni Active Member

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    #12
    It's great. Remember me off the SuperNes games icons style. Maybe could you polish them a bit so as they can be used in webdesigns.
     
    Seni, Aug 6, 2009 IP
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    ViolentAJ Well-Known Member

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    They're pretty good. They kinda remind me of the inventory sprites in the original version of RuneScape.
     
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    #14
    this one is nicer!
    hmm and about the small red potion, it is not too clear i think..
     
    cil13, Aug 8, 2009 IP
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    #15
    Real sweet, you should sell them >:)
     
    Razzstar, Aug 8, 2009 IP
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    #16
    u have done a great job, but as others have said it would only suit for icons...
    but wat i personally feel is that these wont be nice for games which have high graphics.. if u have plans to add them in such games then please design a better than these
     
    chandru1987, Aug 8, 2009 IP
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    #17
    Looks not bad for a programmer ;)
     
    romarto, Aug 11, 2009 IP
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    #18
    Hey I'm a programmer as well and I like your stuff. For some reason I like older game style than the newer.

    You're items are looking good. Older game developers spent more time with the gameplay than the graphics since they we're limited. Today it's the opposite. Most newer games are focused so much on graphic and little on gameplay.
     
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    #19
    Nice, this is really cool! Keep up making them, TMNT :)
     
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    #20
    Pixel art is a valuable talent. This type of style works well for creating icons (which is a big business in itself), so keep going with it! Programmers with graphic ability are hard to find.
     
    Norebbo, Aug 11, 2009 IP