Review My Websites

Hello. Please do me a favor and review two of my websites. URLs are-

http://www.cashbywriting.com
http://www.affiliate-marketing-resource.com

Thank You.

 

like the first one better - second one is bit to basic

 

the second one has a ling domain, seems to hard to type in keyboard.

designs are bit too basic.

 

Second one would look better with a nice css stylesheet. First one is alright but maybe less "bubbles" and better text effect for the logo

 

Umm.. What bubbles are you talking about? I will design a new logo soon. Also, a sales letter gonna be added to the first one. I will try to improve the style of the second one. I know its a bit 'basic'

 

Need to work on the skins.. the first one is a 4/10 max

and the last one.. ah 2 out of 10? lol

 

Does the first one lack a good logo or anything else also?

 

good site, but needs more work on graphics area ...

 

Umm. Are you talking of the second site?

EDIT: Joomla has been installed on the second site and I will set it up tomorrow.

 

http://www.cashbywriting.com - decent look,
i am confused why there is a login/register box there, whats its purpose?

 

I agree with you there!

 

The register box has been removed already along with some other modifications.

 

IMO the designs are OK, as good as it can get from generic CMS... From a business standpoint, I would include more selling points/reasons on why the customer should by your product. The second site has no specific call to action at all, at least not one I picked up. Correct grammar usage is important as well. One small error in the sentence leading up to your sales pitch can be a deal killer. I like the concept of selling your products/services based on teaching others and providing authority on internet marketing and ways to profit from it. Presentation is everything.

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Hi

I prefer the first one like most of the others have said. It could do with a slighlty more attractive header/logo though.

Best of luck

 

the second one took a while to load for me (newest version of firefox)

 

Hmmm... both are pretty basic. However, if your message is effective, you will do well.

 

looks good...

 

I wanted someone to look at my sites and tried to start another topic but, because of me being a newbie (or peon as the label shows) I couldn't. So...I am adding my request here.

Please also review my two websites;

mckeonengineering.com and engineertrades.com

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