Aloha, Took a look at the first link, the second did not work. Bottomline, I liked the look and feel of the first link. I think you have a great concept. Would love to give the service a trial run. Can we have a special offer? About the only advice, would be to repeat that since there are many questionable services in that arena, tesitmonials will help. So perhaps we can be a great testimonial? Look forward to hearing back when your ready to go live.. Aloha
The look of the site is clean, but to me it's just not original looking. It has a real windows XP look to it. The "our reviews" section needs to be spaced down away from the "our guarantee" section and maybe have some type of lead in text... "We have a long list of satisfied...." and then perhaps link to a reviews page. I think customer reviews and testimonials will be one of the keys to your success. Have you thought about image mapping your background image and making the mouse "clickable"? maybe have it link to testimonials page?
Looks fine, and think domain is fine as long as you can get search results coming in. The prices are okay but somewhat steep. Nothing wrong with it just nothing that would make somebody choose you speficially.