Review My Video Game Landing Page

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by MelogKnaj, Oct 25, 2008.

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    Hey could you guys take a look at my video game rental landing page? url is http://www.onlinevideogamerental.info. It's my first landing page so be as critical as you can. Would you find more graphics helpful? What do you think of my header? Thanks for your thoughts.
     
    MelogKnaj, Oct 25, 2008 IP
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    Anyone? I have a new header in there so you can take a look at that as well.
     
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  3. traitorworld

    traitorworld Banned

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    You should be analyzing a landing page through the eyes of a visitor.
    For me, this isn't anything attractive which would made me read the whole stuff.

    The header looks good, design wise its pretty clean but you need to work on the sidebar, add few more images [probably animated].
     
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    A bit plain, header should I think be games related and the 1-2-3 further down the page. Needs brightening up, maybe some game animations, I dont know, but with video games there should be more than just text.
     
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    I would add a nive header with a site title and some game related graphics.
     
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    You should go ahead and add more images. Currently it looks too dull and bland especially with the white color background. Make it attractive and informative, so that there's a reason for the visitors to click on the link and make purchase.
     
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    The header could be better and I think you should get a logo for the site.
     
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