Hello, I'm a new member of DP forum, I have old blog about parenting you may see my blog at http://my-first-baby.blogspot.com please help me by reviewing my blog and give me advice to increase traffic ) I placed google adsense there.. thank you
your site is way too white. Needs a bit of color in there. also the adsense takes up too much room. wastes room that could be used for content.
The site looks cluttered with too much information.. the header area also needs work: use a stock photograph of a baby instead of a "home made" one (the quality and lighting is very poor). Also... change the font on the upper right to arial or verdana..
I would remove the far right column... with all the information and instead just have the column of links. When you have a picture, I would put it aligned left, so that it is in line with your text and also with your ads. Also, it might be worth removing, or just shrinking the first adsense unit, so that visitors can see your content straight away, as at the moment it gets slightly in the way. Hope that helps. Diarmuid
I quite like the design actually. I think the colour scheme achieves the clean look you seem to be after, especially with all the columns. I sort of think you can get away with the 'clutter' being that it's such a clean design. However, I would remove, the first adsense block, so your content is clearly evident. It's the first thing a viewer wants to see, after all.
wow.. thanks for the review, now I have lot of home work now.. let me resumed the review, first for the color, I need more color.. I like green just like DP forum second for adsense, I must reduce the size, third, for photo, I must use use stock photograph, then must change the font reduce or even remove the top up adsense is the most suggest.. thank's anyone.. I'll make a change this weeks.. more suggestion..?
I suggest you fill your homepage with your latest article and I mean a complete article. Visitors now only see LONG list of links and an Adsense... where is the REAL content? I think you should cover this from the first time visitors go to your site, to tell them that you really have information they want.
It seems you have very good content and lot o' them... But please change the template and the header is too good!!
thank's chaser, actually the last post is just about and image, because I just so lazy to update my blog with new useful article, that's why you can't see my real article, but if you click another posting you'll find the real article maybe next monday I'll make new posting about 300-500 words article, so the homepage will not only showing links and adsense.. thank yo for your valuable review cheers Darin
Hi ShReYaS, thank's for reviewing my blog, but I'm sorry, I can't understand what you saying about "But please change the template and the header is too good" are you saying that the template and the header is bad?