Review my unfinished site.

Discussion in 'Websites' started by Online Writer, Feb 27, 2009.

  1. #1
    Ok, my site is www.acneproductsreviewed.com.

    I just revamped it and added a full section on weight loss stuff. It's primarily affiliate crap.

    How do you like the layout of this site?

    I DO REALIZE:
    The acne products aren't uploaded yet.
    The one that IS up has some links that need to be fixed.

    What I plan to do:
    Add an "Articles" section to the right side. OR move the Weight loss section over there.
    Put in some Adsense code below the Title Banner.
    Change 99% of the content on each page so it has better writing.

    I'm mostly concerned about the layout. Does it work?
     
    Online Writer, Feb 27, 2009 IP
  2. Online Writer

    Online Writer Peon

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    #2
    I think I know what I screwed up the most here.

    Should I put JUST acne stuff on this one and then do a more general health site with a handful of sub-domains for each niche?
     
    Online Writer, Feb 28, 2009 IP
  3. Poupoutane

    Poupoutane Active Member

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    #3
    You really should finish thios site before putting it here for review.
     
    Poupoutane, Feb 28, 2009 IP
  4. mindlesswork

    mindlesswork Banned

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    #4
    finish the site, hard to give an honest opinion
     
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  5. G3lmis

    G3lmis Peon

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    Too many effects, the inner shadow and drop shadow don't really good. Also the drop shadow looks weird on the left top side.
     
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    ucgems Peon

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    Hello
    In my opinion I like this site
    as it is completely educative
    and having appeal to invite
    to know more.
    Regards
    ucgems
     
    ucgems, Feb 28, 2009 IP
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    hovsep Banned

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    great looking site, cant wait for it to be complete
     
    hovsep, Feb 28, 2009 IP
  8. Online Writer

    Online Writer Peon

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    Ok, thanks for the advice guys.

    I realize the theme didn't fit the domain name much so I started a new site and one of the redirects will lead to this one.

    I'm dropping the weight loss stuff from this site because, well, it looks too damn greedy and screws the theme up pretty much.

    I'm going to load this one with the content I write this weekend and I'll put it back up!

    Thanks guys!
     
    Online Writer, Feb 28, 2009 IP
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    Frankly , your web design is up to an average.Though there is a new section for weight loss ,it would be better if you can edit your header image to include Acne .Whats those lines under Acne free in three days , on left sidebar ?? . Text fonts in sub pages is really irritating .
    This is just a review from my side . And its up to you to select your desired colors and fonts .

    best of luck.
     
    flickerman, Feb 28, 2009 IP
  10. Online Writer

    Online Writer Peon

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    Thanks Flicker. I'm going for a whole new design through Dreamweaver using the existing scripts. I like the function of that site but it really looked plain...like a site I'd click BACK immediately from lol.

    Site is offline, don't bother reviewing it now please.
     
    Online Writer, Feb 28, 2009 IP