Review my Traffic Pulling Article Creation Serivce

Hi,

i have just developed a site with my old domain name, this service is for webmasters looking out for articles that brings in traffic to their website.

www.moneymaking-madeeasy.com

You can comment on what ever you want, all the commnets will spark an idea to improve the website.

Especially comment on,

price - is it okay or less or high, i going post in content creation forum, so will i get orders for this price.

The yellow color used to high light the important texts is okay or disturbing,

details i have provided is enough or needs more, if so, which part needs more info,

and comment on what ever you come across while reading the website

the comments really helps me a lot.

Thanking you all in advance

 

The design is too simple, you should get a good theme and a logo for the site.

 

Design Works Not Enough, Try To Keep Any Alignments..

 

i have installed a template.

Now it looks some what good than before.

 

I get the impression that you have some sort of English interpretation going on.

The English and grammatical errors are going to make it tough to sell, especially when the site is about article writing.

I would get somebody who can write proper English to proof read your pages.

I'm not trying to be an A hole, just offering some good advice.

Peace,

Herman

 

The copy is not well written.

I have found it needs more and more changes from top to bottom.But now it is a crap.

If you know a copywriter for consultation please provide his username.In future i may contact him.

Thanks for your input.

 

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Yet another sales pages. Domain name is too big and sales page need lot of work.