Review my third logo try

Discussion in 'Design' started by RomAVA, Nov 17, 2012.

  1. #1
    hello guys. after my two horrible logo trys, i have tried again...i have viewed others design works, including collage(which i really like doing) logo design web design etc...i have been working with photoshop for two weeks and i think i have improved my design concept.there are two versions:please guys tell me what am i doing wrong or how can i improve my skills...
     

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  2. RomAVA

    RomAVA Member

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    sorry for double post but i have more 2 versions.check them out and review please.[​IMG]Uploaded with ImageShack.us[​IMG]Uploaded with ImageShack.us
     
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    moonlightgaze Member

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    Well in two weeks i think your doing great. Just keep on doing what your doing :) I like them logos very much.
     
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    free_mockups Active Member

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    Hi,

    Yea..it is sure that you are going smooth.Specially the last two are really good.

    Just carry on.....
     
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  5. RomAVA

    RomAVA Member

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    thanks guys for your kind words.
     
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    Hosting Geek Greenhorn

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    I think its too simple, especially in your colour combination. You can add some attractive colour for your logo. Thats only my opinion :)
     
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    okay guys i have more 2 versions, now with colors and background.
     

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    Demsal Banned

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    Second versions is good
     
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    karthimx Prominent Member

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    The color version is much better.
     
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