Review my Squidoo Lens

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by ExtremistOak, Apr 30, 2008.

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    ExtremistOak, Apr 30, 2008 IP
  2. Leis

    Leis Active Member

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    Hi there,

    I like your web site, the whole design looks friendly and inviting. The only thing I would change is the header. It would be better to make it a bit wider and more distinct.

    Anyway, great work!

    Good luck!
     
    Leis, Apr 30, 2008 IP
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    kingofsanda Peon

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    I like the page layout and I think the site looks good but I agree with Leis
    I think the header should be more prominent.
     
    kingofsanda, Apr 30, 2008 IP
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    Overall, looks good. Everything neatly arranged. However, you might want to recheck the spelling once again. I just noticed the line "trying to regain there hair". Hope that helps.
     
    wkhaiaun, Apr 30, 2008 IP
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    Way too short. Looks like you bought or found an article and posted it. I'd bump up the content by at least 200%. Do some research! (Sorry if I'm blunt).

    ~IMil
     
    inetmillionaire, May 1, 2008 IP
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    neeta Banned

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    neeta, May 1, 2008 IP
  7. Cryogenius

    Cryogenius Peon

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    You can get a reviews from expert Lensmasters at the SquidU Forum, under the Critique section.
     
    Cryogenius, May 1, 2008 IP
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    satya_love Banned

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    Nice site indeed!

    I liked the features and design :)
     
    satya_love, May 2, 2008 IP
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    Nice but the heading needs a revamp though.
     
    saint75, May 2, 2008 IP