Hello, everyone! If you have a minute or two to spare, please consider taking a look at my new social media sales website and providing me with your feedback. The best way to improve is to see through fresh eyes so I'm very interested in hearing any and all thoughts on the site! Your thoughts are important to me. If I can review one of your sites in return, just let me know! You can view my site here. Thanks!
Do you think it is too simple? If so, do you have any recommendations? Thanks for taking the time to review my site! Thanks for the review! Do you have any suggestions on how to improve the color scheme?
It bit difficult to catch what the site actually offers in the very first visit. Lot of text content. The site resembles a blog rather than a business offer website. No clear info about pricing. http://www.revisitors.com/ will be a good reference.
As a visitor point of view 1- The first look of website is not at all eye catching. (First impression is the last impression ) 2- As @SouEl said,it's difficult to catch what the site offers (Should have put on a clear headline of what you are offering rather than the quote at the top of your image.Your quote would have worked like a charm if you had put it after your content ) 3- I felt your image inappropriate according to your offer. But may be bcoz I don't. understand japanese written in your pic. Remember picture speaks thousand words. 4- "Are you ready to master social media? Enter the dojo " Though I appreciate your hard work,I thought it looked like some child scrambled the white board. Sorry no offence. 5- Your content is too long. I bet many will just switch of the site before they reach the bottom of the page to enter the dojo. Just feed in to the point and avoid unnecessary talks. 6-A nice looking entry button would have been great. @PhiladelphiaIM ...Now it's just my personal view and other may agree or disagree