review my site

Discussion in 'Websites' started by wallie1233, Mar 30, 2010.

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    wallie1233, Mar 30, 2010 IP
  2. mongo22

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    Love the site template and think the content is excellent. One thing I did notice is "tutorial" is spelled wrong. Also, based on my experience when I started blogging, the overuse of ads will turn off readers. It looks like you currently have more adsense ads then content. I'd build the blog up a bit before including all those ads. Once you have a following, more content and authority, then you could place the ads.
     
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    The adsense integration is AWFUL! And the website does not have any grammar whatsoever!
     
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    Most noticeable thing is the spelling and grammar, this needs to be gone over.
     
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    You didn't really do anything yet. You have a website, yes, but there is not much content there. I did check the other pages. There are some articles to read but you got them from ezinearticles. You should also do something about your grammar. Post here again when you have done some changes in your site and Id be more than happy to review your site for you.

    Dan
     
    wandu, Mar 30, 2010 IP
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    I agree with wandu, nothing post.
     
    abcdefg, Mar 30, 2010 IP