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The site is too basic really. You have a good conecpt though so keep up and try a little harder with the design, you'll probably want a little more information on how you pay and so on.
Why would you put your referral email in the link... Are you sure this is your site or you're just trying to send traffic with your referral and make commission?
This doesn't need a review unless your looking to compare it to other sites that it mimics. If its a case of it being a good copy of a sales pitch, its great.