review my site

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    Nabeel C, Jan 18, 2009 IP
  2. justinlorder

    justinlorder Peon

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    #2
    It is a good landing page .
    However some font family are not very nice .
     
    justinlorder, Jan 19, 2009 IP
  3. Barakos

    Barakos Peon

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    #3
    Your landing page looks nice. I recommend decreasing the font,
    and to add more happy customers review.
    Thanks
     
    Barakos, Jan 19, 2009 IP
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    dcpanganiban Peon

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    #4
    I believe the landing page is too long
     
    dcpanganiban, Jan 19, 2009 IP
  5. Barakos

    Barakos Peon

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    #5
    Yes he's right you can minimize the page by decreasing the font.

    Thanks
     
    Barakos, Jan 19, 2009 IP
  6. BestThemes

    BestThemes Peon

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    #6
    yes, good landing page. Maybe 1-2 images are too big, but overal good work!
     
    BestThemes, Jan 19, 2009 IP
  7. newyears1978

    newyears1978 Peon

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    #7
    Honestly I wouldn't buy from it, I would (if I wasn't reviewing it) click away really quick.

    Some of the page has capitalization errors such as in the book's table of content..and some of the wording just seems dumbed down (not professional or serious)..and some of the spacing between lines is too great (for me) and some of the fonts are too large)

    Not too bad otherwise.. (hope I didn't come off harsh!)

    By the way..what is website flipping?
     
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  8. river

    river Active Member

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    I would include your site name at the top of the homepage.
     
    river, Jan 19, 2009 IP
  9. mediabanana

    mediabanana Peon

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    I think it lacks some presentation -maybe break the megapage down into several individual pages (about 1 screen size each). then include some basic info on each, like 1 testimonial, and some quick facts.

    Present the whole thing like more of a slideshow -I can't speak for anyone else, but I wouldn't have scrolled down past the first couple of paragraphs. It all just looks like a farce scam.
     
    mediabanana, Jan 19, 2009 IP
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    workfromhome4cash Peon

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    #10
    very nice I really like the design be very catchy. valerie
     
    workfromhome4cash, Jan 19, 2009 IP
  11. Nabeel C

    Nabeel C Guest

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    #11
    thank you so much for your post. well received.

    i will change based on the information provide here.

    once again, I'm feeling gratitude!

    thanks
     
    Nabeel C, Jan 19, 2009 IP
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    DMEGroup Active Member

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    I would invest in a template, something that is attractable and will want to keep your visitors there.
     
    DMEGroup, Jan 19, 2009 IP
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    workinMOM Peon

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    it looks a little like every other "make money now" site, and i would update the paypal screenshot, but overall, nice
     
    workinMOM, Jan 19, 2009 IP
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    xceedbd Well-Known Member

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    #14
    sorry i didnt like the design, need more development, specially need good banner, and pls try to use another font.
     
    xceedbd, Jan 20, 2009 IP
  15. luckychan

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    #15
    i do not like the design too. it is very boring and confusing to read the content. you need a concept first, before you create your website, it is very helpful.
     
    luckychan, Jan 20, 2009 IP