Looking for reviews for my membership site: http://www.plrnicheclub.com General comments on my sales process will be appreciated and if there is anything I should add/remove. Best reviews will win a free membership.
Hello there, First of all I feel that before one reviews a site like this he has to take into account that this is a very type of site where even aesthetics are secondary. Having said that, the first thing I would point out is that it takes awhile to understand what exactly the site is all about. I understand that its important to sell without really making it clear that your doing it, but its crucial to understand what is it that you exactly do, and that first phrase quite simply doesn't do that for me. Is it an ebook that teaches you how to become rich? If so, say so! If the other ebooks don't on the market don't work, that's something I want to learn after you have told me that what you are trying to sell does in fact work.
I completely agree with Pedro, your site looks exactly like a million other sites that try to sell magic tricks to make money with Google, as it were such a thing... maybe focusing on selling whatever it is you're selling without using the infomercial formula of "I made a ton of money on the first 7 days", but rather give it a more human approach, like you'll be making $20 the first day and a little bit more every day, and by the end of the month you can make $500 or so, I don't know, just my 2 cents, I do believe the old saying that "if it's too good to be true then it probably is"... Btw, that JS popup it's very annoying. Good luck!
Thanks for your suggestion. My salesletter isn't an "eBook" it's a monthly subscription website, so perhaps that is where the confusion in my approach came about. It's mainly about profiting from PLR (private label right) products. If you haven't heard of the term before then I would imagine my site to seem very confusing and perhaps misleading. As for the pop-up at the end, intrusive yes, but I did notice it to substantially big my list at a bigger percentage versus a traditional opt-in. Not only that, but it gives me a second chance to sell to visitors. One reason why I am sticking with it. Any other comments/suggestions?