Review my site template please

This is my first full template, and I would like to get advice. I'm not looking for an ego boost

Any advice?

http://www.addressmunger.com/test/CannonsFightClub/sefl/

 

it looks okay, I would suggest change the color scheme maybe, otherwise i think its good for a start

 

Firstly try not repeating the same couple of words over and over again for fill in text - it detracts from looking at the design I suggest going to lipsum.com and using some lorem ispum text for a filler.

The buttons are a bit too big, look at some other sites and look at the sizes they are.

Maybe have a look at adding a footer too

But it's good to see you're trying.

 

Good tip on the lorem ipsum. Just added that.

I agree about my buttons. My brother agrees they're too big too.

I'll think of what I can put in a footer.

 

hmm. not soo bad , not soo good , try to improve it

 

I'm sorry, but what's the point of this post? Of course it can be improved. Take a hint from the above posts to figure out how to post. Can you actually say something helpful?

 

hey dude it is fine good
keep it up

 

I changed the buttons and made them smaller. I also changed the background from pure black to #111111 because I think it makes it easier to read.

Unfortunately I'm stuck w/ that blue and yellowish letters, because it's the site owner's premade logo color choice.

What do people think now? Should I change the buttons more? Change the #111111 to something else? Anything else?

 

Buttons way to big.

 

Moving to a whte background. From a usability perspective, colored backgrounds provide a negative contrast for reading and can cause users to leave. Id consider testing an alternative design utilizing white.

craig