Review my site please!

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    Squirrel_monkey, May 9, 2008 IP
  2. tanicos

    tanicos Banned

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    #2
    a lot of white over there..don't like that..
    buttons- same thing
    those characters--nope
    sorry
     
    tanicos, May 9, 2008 IP
  3. Cryxellis23

    Cryxellis23 Banned

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    #3
    I know how to appreciate someone's work, but tanicos is right I also don't like the white buttons and the white background very bright.. if you like you can add up other interesting images that is related to your site.. that's all :)
     
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    tokyoice Well-Known Member

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    #4
    Wheres all the pages? all I see is a couple of pieces of text and a lot of Adsense code around it?
     
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  5. Squirrel_monkey

    Squirrel_monkey Active Member

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    #5
    Ah I was a bit worried they'd be hard to find, the buttons at the top navigate to the pages and those links are again down the right-hand side.

    I was kind of going for the 'someone just drew/wrote this on a piece of blank paper' look. It was meant to be kind of stylistically sketchy. But I guess I failed :S

    What do you recommend? Blue buttons or something?

    Thanks for your responses.
     
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  6. sheilasultani

    sheilasultani Peon

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    #6
    I kind of likes it - it's different and fun - I had no problem finding the buttons, I think you should keep it and see how it does.
     
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    #7
    It's not bad but why no CSS?
     
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    SEOBusiness Well-Known Member

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    #8
    Great site mate,and the placement of adsense also good looking.
     
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  9. Squirrel_monkey

    Squirrel_monkey Active Member

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    Oh cool thanks guys few! I'll keep my fingers crossed.

    I know this is a dumb question; but where and why would I use CSS? I haven't used it before and I'd be willing to learn it, but my understanding is it just sets the layout and style for the pages and is a little quicker... is that all it does? Cos I can just cut and paste :-P
     
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    #10
    It just seems like the sidebars flow into the text. If that is how you want it then that is fine, but with CSS you could add a line to separate the content from ads.
     
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    Very nice. I think you should focus on adding more content in the resource section.
     
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    #12
    it's very good, could use more content but other than that its pretty good.
     
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    #13
    I agree with nubridges .Content is the king ! Add more content.
     
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  14. Squirrel_monkey

    Squirrel_monkey Active Member

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    #14
    Thanks allot guys, I'm feeling good about it now. And yeah I realise it's a little empty atm but hopefully should fill up soon - I have access to quite a few markets but just wanted to get something up to start with. For the resources I'm just looking for some related links to trade with and perhaps some affiliate schemes. I'll be doing that tonight.

    Thanks for your support!
     
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    Sorry I don't like it. Besides the other comments, and I didn't read all of them. But one thing that really stands out are the hyphens. They are hard to remember and if I telling someone "market hyphen for hyphen writers" they probably won't remember by the time they get to their PC. I try to stay away from hyphens, numbers or words that can be spelled more than one way. And there is too much white space, the navigation is bad and uncreative and there is too much ad space. And CSS is the second best thing that happened to the internet. Only second to Firefox. :) Makes coding a lot easier and updates.
     
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    I agree with all the content posts - add more content to break up the ads
     
    jred2002, May 9, 2008 IP