Review my Site please

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by Titan2, Apr 11, 2009.

  1. #1
    Hi all,
    I have developed my mini site on Asbestos. Of course i have a lot of content to be added . I would like to have your opinions before i go ahead more into this project.
    Site: http://asbestoseffects.com
    Thanks in Advance
     
    Titan2, Apr 11, 2009 IP
  2. immninc

    immninc Peon

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    #2
    looks good, great work.
     
    immninc, Apr 11, 2009 IP
  3. Titan2

    Titan2 Member

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    #3
    Thanks ...
    Any more ?
     
    Titan2, Apr 11, 2009 IP
  4. 2advance

    2advance Well-Known Member

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    #4
    Try to compress the content width, it covers the entire browser (Firefox 3.1), check it..
     
    2advance, Apr 12, 2009 IP
  5. awa

    awa Greenhorn

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    #5
    looks not really professional as for me
    but at least i'd fixed alignment
    somehow like this

    [​IMG]
     
    awa, Apr 12, 2009 IP
  6. emlak

    emlak Peon

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    #6
    useful site,
    did not have to use aspx.(html - static content)
    in the form of plain text.
    use <b></b> tags at proper place.
     
    emlak, Apr 12, 2009 IP
  7. Vipburn

    Vipburn Guest

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    #7
    It looks okay, but it would be much better if you set it to a fix width instead of a fluid layout. Also, you should break up the paragraphs as your text just runs together.
     
    Vipburn, Apr 12, 2009 IP
  8. praetserge

    praetserge Notable Member

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    #8
    I guess it's too early to judge... you need to finish the home page so people could review it... now it's just very unprofessional
     
    praetserge, Apr 12, 2009 IP
  9. drewbrown

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    #9
    It's nice & clean, but I agree about the fixed width.... it now looks like just a big block of text.
    Also would try to add some more photos or graphics... maybe stock photo(s). As of now, it's too text-heavy for my tastes.
     
    drewbrown, Apr 12, 2009 IP
  10. stupidpeople

    stupidpeople Peon

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    #10
    your website is very neat ....
     
    stupidpeople, Apr 12, 2009 IP
  11. Titan2

    Titan2 Member

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    #11
    Thanks all for your valuable suggestions!!
    I don't have google adsense account yet as this is the first site developed.So I am planning to develop more graphically once i get approved by Google adsense.Meanwhile I am working on content as content is king.
    Any more suggestions on which sections to include. And also after how many days can i apply for adsense??
    In the meantime please keep coming your suggestions.
    I'll be working on them and post an updated look and feel very soon..
    Thanks
     
    Titan2, Apr 12, 2009 IP
  12. tradertm

    tradertm Peon

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    #12
    Hi there nice articles keep up the good work.
     
    tradertm, Apr 13, 2009 IP
  13. ziya

    ziya Well-Known Member

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    #13
    fix width and height ..

    awa example would be better..

    good luck
     
    ziya, Apr 13, 2009 IP
  14. winniethepunk

    winniethepunk Banned

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    #14
    Nice site like your logo.

    Good luck.
     
    winniethepunk, Apr 14, 2009 IP
  15. uwan

    uwan Peon

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    #15
    good starting site.....more color
     
    uwan, Apr 15, 2009 IP
  16. gr8designdude11

    gr8designdude11 Banned

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    #16
    site looks good in layout but you can change texts fonts. i like your header and logo. looks nice.
     
    gr8designdude11, Apr 16, 2009 IP
  17. Titan2

    Titan2 Member

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    #17
    Hello all,
    I have fixed the layout problem of my website and you can check the updated version here. Any suggestions on graphics or image oriented ideas are more than welcome. Once again thanks all for your time.
    Website:Click Here
    Thanks
     
    Titan2, Apr 17, 2009 IP
  18. dwi

    dwi Active Member

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    #18
    nice site, i like your design.
    greate work
     
    dwi, Apr 24, 2009 IP
  19. aneel90

    aneel90 Banned

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    #19
    Your site looks fine now... though I think we can tell better once its done
     
    aneel90, Apr 24, 2009 IP