Review my site! Please... I'm Begging!!!

Discussion in 'Websites' started by frosteam, Sep 15, 2010.

  1. #1
    Hello to All DP's...

    I really need constructive criticism with my new site Personal Gamers Philippines. Its an arcade site!

    URL: http://personalgamers.com

    Please... I really need it.. For me to know what are the things to be changed and the things to retain.... I'm in need of reviews... Plsss... Thank You!!

    -Frosteam
     
    frosteam, Sep 15, 2010 IP
  2. China_girl

    China_girl Well-Known Member

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    #2
    First of all, I would advice you not to post such titles like begging :)
    Why do you hve to beg for a review, if your site is good, people will visit and give you reviews.
    BTW, you have to remove those pop ups which comes in the left as well as right hand side corners of the window, otherwise the games seem to be good.
     
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  3. frosteam

    frosteam Active Member

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    The wibiya app in the footer? Do it really destruct?
     
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    It seems kind of "busy". There is too much stuff on the right side. I'd add some space between the elements. It appears kind of chaotic.

    But other than than that I think it looks okay.
     
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    #5
    This website looks very chaotic..
     
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  6. editionart

    editionart Guest

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    #6
    divide you title in 2 parts one for yahoo another for google
    for Google 65 and for yahoo 120 put average monthly search keywords in description and title
     
    editionart, Sep 15, 2010 IP
  7. steven.francis8@gmail.com

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    #7
    The site is not well organized. Put categories in more prominent positions. Try to give a flash look for games as JPEG images destroy the beauty...
     
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    cutesecrets Active Member

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    You have a good collection of games! The logo is similar to E-games :D or i think it's just on my mind because of the colors :)
     
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  9. frosteam

    frosteam Active Member

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    Will add some space between the elements... Thank YoU!
     
    frosteam, Sep 15, 2010 IP
  10. frosteam

    frosteam Active Member

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    How come? Tell me some info so that i Can change things.. Thanks!
     
    frosteam, Sep 15, 2010 IP
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    You should have a top 10 section near the top to show the most clicked/played games. The navigation is too small as well. I see you're trying to squeeze all the genres into one line. You should group categories together if you need to. Somewhere between 8-10 links at the top should be the max.
     
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    frosteam Active Member

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    Oww... you right... Will add keywords and other stuffs then... Thanks!!!
     
    frosteam, Sep 15, 2010 IP
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    Website is way too dense for me, things aren't spaced out enough Makes it difficult to navigate through it especially since its heavy in terms of colors.
     
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    #14
    I agree with previous members in that the site looks chaotic, and it makes the visitor feel that he has to either leave your web site or spend a lot of time searching hard to find what he is looking for. You need to make the design, and the structures more attractive, friendly, and easy to navigate.

    Also, you need to center the navigation links as well as the footer links. Also, you can increase the height of the navigation bar and make the navigation links more prominent for the visitors. The search button under the banner in the top is not prominent at all. Maybe you could change the background to something more easy on the eye.
     
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    It's a nice site, the pictures thumbnails on the main page are a little low quality for some reason. Also the extra bar for login on top and chat on teh boottom is a little much, is there any way you can combine them?
     
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  16. The Peoples SEO

    The Peoples SEO Well-Known Member

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    #16
    very, especially with the loud video that comes on automatically...
     
    The Peoples SEO, Sep 15, 2010 IP
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    I like the games, but they take too long to load. Also, the main page is just too busy...
     
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    #18
    u may wana change the background, its annoying
     
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    #19
    Overall.. I felt the site looks great at the first look...
     
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    #20
    To start off, the background(pinkish dots,etc.) needs to go, it's just not attractive and does not match the subject of your blog. I would also move the Sponsors section way higher up in order to generate more of the Advertiser's interest. And the footer popups are annoying and do get in the way of me trying to gauge the site.

    Now with all that being said you do have a good niche and all those titles in the Available Games section could turn out to be a good thing as far as keywords and SEO is concerned and I also like how individual posts ask for users to login and submit their scores as this is a good way to gain subscribers for a niche like this:)

    p.s.
    Allowing users to embed the games was a good addition as well;)
     
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