Review My site of Travel

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    I have a site which contains Travel In Bali, bali-carcharter.net
    can you review it??
    Thank you
     
    ktp2012, Sep 25, 2013 IP
  2. Jessica Spowart

    Jessica Spowart Greenhorn

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    I think your website looks very nice. It is obvious that you put a lot of work into it. The only suggestion I can offer is to find a native english speaking person to correct minor grammatical errors. For example, you do not want to capitalize every word in a sentence. Stick with capitalizing only the first word, unless you are trying to emphasize a word such as "CHEAP".
    Here is the paragraph on the left of your page. I made some corrections, however I suggest finding someone near you to go through the whole page. Good luck with your business.
    "Do you need transport during ( your stay) in Bali? Offering To You Private Bali Car Charter offers a private experience for only Rp 400.000 ($42 A day). A full day car charter is maximum 10 hours. You make your desired itinerary, and let us take you wherever you want to go"
     
    Jessica Spowart, Sep 25, 2013 IP
  3. werliyu

    werliyu Well-Known Member

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    Fix your minor grammar errors and add more pictures.
     
    werliyu, Sep 27, 2013 IP
  4. monkeye

    monkeye Active Member

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    Hi ktp,

    First of all, I like handmade websites, well done!

    I don't like the menu hover effect very much, it should not increase the text size.
    I would replace the email address with a contact form, this way you will prevent any spam.
     
    monkeye, Sep 29, 2013 IP
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    floriano Well-Known Member

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    Is nice.

    Characters: font-size use smaller, do not use bold (unless the title). Did you use red characters on a blue background, it is not pleasant.

    Work with attention to font. I like the site.

    Good luck!
     
    floriano, Sep 29, 2013 IP
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    karthimx Prominent Member

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    need to use better font styles and colors.
     
    karthimx, Sep 30, 2013 IP