Review my site and give comment guys !!

hey guys i have to do lots n lots of changes can u plz give me comment.

http://www.ujwol.com.np

 

What do you want us to review?

 

wow.. design looks very professional. I especially liked the Hire me button.
good job

 

Your website is full of grammar errors that reflects a lack of professionalism.

http://www.ujwol.com.np/portfolio.html

It should be something like "Portfolio available upon request."


This section is on the bottom right hand side and barely noticeable. It needs to be put in the middle of the page so people can see it better.

What does "Ujwol" mean? Its on this page - http://www.ujwol.com.np/about.html

This page is full of grammar errors, such as spelling, comma placement and spacing. Never use acronyms in a professional letter. Words like Sr should be spelled out - senior, not Sr. Try not to use the same word twice in the same sentence.

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Sorry ukesh, but I have to agree. You need someone fluent in English to help you with the content.

 

your design is simply gr8. Looking very cool.

 

wOw a very well designed site, I am impressed. But I have to agree with ~kev~.

 

Thankx for the comment guys but my english sucks can any one help me writing content

 

I will help correct some of the grammar on your page, but it will be this evening - maybe 5 or 6 hours from now.

 

Here you go, this should get you started. I worked on this for about 20 minutes or so. Everything inside the <>'s, you should remove them and insert your own information. Make changes as you see fit, consider this only as a template.

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Thats a REALY nice layout!!! Love the colors heck I love everything about it!!!

 

Aside from the grammatical errors, the site looks very appealing
to the eye the template and the color scheme is excellent.