Review my sales page!

Hi everyone, I am currently working on my sales page which is live online now but is still very much a work in progress. the website is fat britney and is a weight loss manual. Firstly please ignore the reviews, they are there for demo purposes only until I have a few from kind DP members who are reviewing the ebook. Second of all do you have any tips or suggestions? Should I build other pages like a blog, or just keep it a straight sales page?

Thanks!

 

For a site like yours, blogs will be very helpful.

 

thanks for the suggestion - I will work on it tonight

Site taken down to make changes - will ask for another review later in the week

 

Link is down

 

I know - see above post

 

oops lol sory

 

I agree. Viewers would want that. Best of luck!

 

Im now including a blog with the purchase of the ebook - kind of a day by day tips type thing. Do you think that will be enough?