review my sales page

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by kodut, Aug 12, 2010.

  1. #1
    hows my sales page looking . http://nukeyouracne.com

    I am still to add few testimonials and buy buttons

    i would like to know about the content (i.e can a customer buy it after reading the page)

    and colors theme
     
    kodut, Aug 12, 2010 IP
  2. xaer8

    xaer8 Active Member

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    #2
    The sales page looks quite artistic and colorful. You may want to add some images to convince visitors. Picture describe thousands of words. Just my thoughts.
     
    xaer8, Aug 12, 2010 IP
  3. ajwalsh

    ajwalsh Peon

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    Yeah, I agree. Some images would really help make your website look more professional, but overall it looks pretty good. The tagline doesn't really make sense when you read it out loud; I would probably re-write that. Also, are you planning to add anything more in the navigation bar? Right now it looks strange with just one tab.
     
    ajwalsh, Aug 12, 2010 IP
  4. kodut

    kodut Well-Known Member

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    i have made changes as said and added a few pics .. how does it look now
     
    kodut, Aug 12, 2010 IP
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    Looks pretty good. I would work on the icons a little more in the right menu, and make sure they are clear. For example, your category icon. What the heck is that?
     
    dontworry, Aug 13, 2010 IP
  6. abhijit

    abhijit Notable Member

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    I would say its really cool page and i like the layout of the site
     
    abhijit, Aug 14, 2010 IP
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    jewel3000 Peon

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    I didn't read the entire page, but I think your headlines read well. I read down to the 3rd line initially, stopping before the various questions in red.

    I then scrolled down to where you had crossed out the Ocutane, etc. drugs that don't work. The cross out caught my eye, so make sure you have a powerful selling point there.

    Keep adding the other things you mentioned.
     
    jewel3000, Aug 14, 2010 IP
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    asepsjmak Well-Known Member

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    you should try other themes for your website, i' dont too like these..
    i'm sorry
     
    asepsjmak, Aug 15, 2010 IP
  9. SuperduperWeek

    SuperduperWeek Peon

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    looks good. 8/10
     
    SuperduperWeek, Aug 15, 2010 IP