Review My Sales Page

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by jason145, Apr 24, 2010.

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    Can you guys please review my sales page in terms of the content length and any other things which are important....
    Help will be highly appreciated...
    here is my website http://vatspasskey.com
     
    jason145, Apr 24, 2010 IP
  2. Olaf

    Olaf Peon

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    i would install wordpress, that alone would make your page, easier to read. But also give you a layout and structure.

    At fist i read it and thought you were just talking about your hobby, then i realise you are actually trying to sell a module. This is not very clear, the information swapped me and the purpose of the site was lost. Split all that information up into managable sizes to read.

    Things to improve: Layout, Structure, Add Navigation, Add a contact form, Use a free template or install wordpress.

    Hope that helps.
     
    Olaf, Apr 24, 2010 IP
  3. gkruegin

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    The content seems pretty good but I think you could use a little more color. Kind of boring.
     
    gkruegin, Apr 24, 2010 IP
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    the site is very dull
     
    sandbox89, Apr 24, 2010 IP