Review my sales page

Hello,

I am interested to see what you guys/girls think about my sales page. It is new and I wanted to get some feedback on how I could make it better. Please feel free to say what you like. I am no professional copywriter by any means.

URL= http://www.5PR5.com

Thanks John

 

1. When I visit the page I don't know where to focus my eyes on.
2. Banner image (the no traffic = no sales thing) use low quality jpeg compression, and why you host it on photobucket?
3. Too many text - you should reduce text and add more images?
4. Black font color on white background hurts my eyes.

Just my opinion as a site visitor.

 

typo? "with 48 hours" => "within 48 hours"

 

I would immeadiately close down the window if i see such web. You should work more on layouts and design FIRSTLY.

 

Thanks you for your opinions. I fixed the typo and I am working on other issues mentioned.

 

I dont like the yellow highlighted text, nor do I like the ticks in the box under the "Awesome - 100% Money Back Guarantee " heading......I dont think their is too much text but I would break it up with some more images..
Good luck with this site