Review my sale page

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    neilstricklandy, Dec 7, 2009 IP
  2. Sweely

    Sweely Well-Known Member

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    You still have lots of work to do. You need bigger text, and not a background like that. The text should be in black and red only. Don't make your bottom look as amateurish as it's doing. Add a few links like "sitemap, contact us, partners".

    These were my two cents, but I'm pretty sure you'll have a bunch of other people jumping you in this thread. Good luck!
     
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    Lose the light blue text and you need to change the background. If you have graphics software create a background square the colour you want. make this square 300 by 300 and and the graphic inside this square. Use this square as a new background and Swoopo logo will be spread out more. Good luck
     
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    Dee2007 Active Member

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    Before you do anything else you really should change the background.

    Dee
     
    Dee2007, Dec 7, 2009 IP
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    Dee2007 Active Member

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    Before you do anything else you really should change the background.

    Not good on the eyes ;)

    Dee
     
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    I'm not feeling the background either. It kinda makes me dizzy when I scroll down.
     
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    Its not upto the mark still you have to make good looking sales page then only you will get good leads
     
    webkicker123, Dec 7, 2009 IP
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    #8
    its nt so gud change the design
     
    Mit86, Dec 9, 2009 IP
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    Bad background it needs to be white or light blue
     
    br3adman, Dec 9, 2009 IP
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    The layout is fine but need to change the background image.
     
    netdriver788, Dec 12, 2009 IP
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    Definatly lose that background, buyers will be put of as soon as they start scrolling.

    Change the light blue text to black, and change the text "Your Satisfaction Is Absolutely Guaranteed!" to red.
     
    flurgle, Dec 12, 2009 IP
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    #12
    very bad design...not long to watch
     
    Heckfi, Dec 12, 2009 IP
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    In the first glimpse the web page seems to be non professional, until one have a closer look on the effective way of your working on the page. Good and unique way of working. Keep it up.
     
    james.parker, Dec 15, 2009 IP
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    The background definately needs to be changed, it's notvery appealing to the eye. Especially when scrolling downward through your content.

    There isn't much to the layout, but for what you are trying to deliver. It seems to work perfectly fine.
     
    LiamMoseley, Dec 15, 2009 IP