I make blog for writing review, opinion, suggestion about anything escpecially website. The address is in http://repition.blogspot.com Repition is term from ~Review Opinion Suggestion~, hahaha i makes my own term..... Yeah, i already make review about google, keepvid, indonesian blog site, and GT pro DVD media product. Please review my site, how is my review? It's good or no? How about my english? It's bad or it's good enough? Thanks.....
The blog needs work, the design could be significantly better, you should consider getting a premium wordpress theme. The content is not well written, there are quite a bit of grammatical errors, you should consider hiring someone to write your content.
kingofsanda is correct. Sentence like isn't appropriate to convince a reader to be attracted to the specific product. Instead hiring an article writer would be a lot more better.
About a bit grammatical error it's normal because i'm not in native english country Anyway, the most important think, do you understand what i want to say in my blog? A bit error is not problem, right? Well, content writer is good idea, but it's need extra cost