Review My Pickup Artist Mindset Sales Page

Discussion in 'Websites' started by kvakkaboom, Sep 20, 2008.

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    So this is my first product and sales page on the net.
    I'm already making sales but I'm waiting for more JV partners to get the speed up and sell even more every day.

    I'm wondering if the site looks good, gives you a good first impression, and you feel that you get enough value!

    Thanks!
     
    kvakkaboom, Sep 20, 2008 IP
  2. kvakkaboom

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    The site looks good, I like the concept, I think it would be great if you
    added some reviews of some satisfied customers.
     
    kingofsanda, Sep 20, 2008 IP
  4. kvakkaboom

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    Yha, I was thinking of that. Need to get some reviews from some of my students. Thanks for the suggestion.
     
    kvakkaboom, Sep 20, 2008 IP
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    the web head lock god but the rest look noob sry dude add more power...
     
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    Thanks for the comments.. can you specify?
    Is it the layout that looks crap? Is it the copy writing?
     
    kvakkaboom, Sep 21, 2008 IP