Review my online laptop store?

Discussion in 'Websites' started by kre8iveim, Oct 3, 2008.

  1. #1
    I'd like to get some honest opinions about the new site I built. Here's the link: BuyAsusLaptops.com. Could someone check it out and tell me what I can do to improve it? I already know I need to fix the shopping cart and write some more text on the main page, but any other suggestions would be greatly appreciated. Thanks.
     
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  2. kingofsanda

    kingofsanda Peon

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    #2
    There's nothing to review because there's no content on the page.
     
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  3. Crazysah

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    #3
    Exactly. I agree with kingofsanda!!

    I searched some more and found some stuff and I must say that it is a pretty decent site. Only the home page needs to be really worked upon. Rest all is fine!
     
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  4. zerocooler

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    Not bad at all. I found it easy to navigate and use.
     
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    gkd_uk Well-Known Member

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    #5
    If I was looking for a laptop and came across your website, I would not purchase one from your site.

    The site needs to be changed completely. Add pictures, more content and remove the adsense.

    You have a nice domain name though
     
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  6. milox

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    #6
    As soon as you see this site, you're being bombed with adsense, overall it's a pretty nice site and the navigation is great, also like the review feature next to each product, just do something about all the ads (give them a less prominent place, cause I think people do click away when they see a lot of ads) and you're good to go.
     
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  7. assam_siddibapa

    assam_siddibapa Banned

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    #7
    i will never buy any thing from you .....

    0* for template
    -10* for content
     
    assam_siddibapa, Oct 5, 2008 IP
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    #8
    Ad farm dude, need content
     
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  9. Mega B

    Mega B Well-Known Member

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    #9
    Had a quick look and then hit the exit button.
     
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    #10
    You should definitely change the logo. The cheese coloured logo looks nothing like the asus colour scheme.
    The colours of your logo also dont relate to your menus etc.

    if I were you i'd move the google ads to under the nav links. When a site is more ads etc than usseful content people leave quick.
    When they see a page looking like that, which is only 50% useful looking links, theres a small chance they are gonna click.
     
  11. Ecreation

    Ecreation Active Member

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    #11
    Get a professional template made by professional designers if you want to sell something as costly as laptops.
     
    Ecreation, Oct 6, 2008 IP
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    #12
    Should have a professional looking template. Put some service oriented content. Why so much adsense at the beginning?
     
    m_b, Oct 6, 2008 IP
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    kikuyaar123 Banned

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    #13
    nothing to see in this site.
     
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    #14
    COncentrated basically on ads?
     
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  15. RovingCalypso

    RovingCalypso Well-Known Member

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    #15
    I gotta agree with the comments above. Looks very spammy, not at all like a store.

    More like an information site.
     
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    tigrrra Well-Known Member

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    #16
    dose nto work correcly in IE6 you need to test in IE6 IE7 Mozilla to cover most of the population. and you would need a new design too plain.
     
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    The site is pulling up with errors for me, running IE
     
    HyperRob, Oct 7, 2008 IP
  18. Brandon Sheley

    Brandon Sheley Illustrious Member

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    #18
    needs a LOT of work, especially a new design
     
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    Brandon Sheley Illustrious Member

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    oops.. sry for the double post.. i never hit submit on the first post :(
     
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  20. kre8iveim

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    Thanks for the opinions guys. I'll keep working on it.
     
    kre8iveim, Oct 8, 2008 IP