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Discussion in 'Websites' started by mamo5002000, Dec 17, 2014.

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    Hi all DB members,

    Please review my website http://howtoreduceweightfastt.com/ How to reduce weight fast , It's as appears from it's name for weight loss but i'm not native english speaker so please review my content and give me rating in persintage if it's possible.

    And there is another thing, i started my website before 1 month it was alexa ranking 26,000,000 + Now it's 616,000+ only.
    Is it a good job ?
    Thanks for your help
     
    mamo5002000, Dec 17, 2014 IP
  2. FCM

    FCM Well-Known Member

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    Your site is very slow to load... It took more than 10 seconds (at least for me). Concept is way over taken. Very hard to compete.

    Design could be a little more fuller but is a good start.

    It needs fresher content for google to become more happy an article a week is usually good.

    best of luck
     
    FCM, Jan 2, 2015 IP
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    saheemnet Active Member

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    but your articles are copied
     
    saheemnet, Jan 6, 2015 IP
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    mamo5002000 Active Member

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    FCM & Saheemnet, Thanks for your opinions i'll work on all of this soon.
     
    mamo5002000, Jan 13, 2015 IP
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    Website loads very slow.
    Remove all the links at the bottom from directories, o maybe leave just one or two. No more
    Gramar- .fix all your mistakes at least in headlines (I believe it is in english)
    Words like:
    sponsers- sponsors
    How To Looking 10 Years Younger- it could be how to look 10 years younger
    You Whrite content for visitors, not for search engine, if visitor see mistakes in text- does not give trust.
    Slider at the top- these images not attractive for me at all.
    Theme design itself?- hmmm not bad.
     
    moneyroad, Jan 13, 2015 IP