Review my NEW site!

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  1. isaiasd2003

    isaiasd2003 Guest

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    #21
    Hey, you new visitors and old ones. KEEP in mind I already have a real domain, and I've designed websites for 10 yrs. Also I have my own real host, rather than tripod. Tripod is only my test page, for content only.

    I can throw out a design that'll make u jump outta your seat, no problem, I wont yet since I'm not fully done optimizing, and adding new content(like pages). I'll try and refine the info on the page, but another thing to think about is this: many new visitors(consumers) to the site don't know enough about spy software to buy. I'll probably be updating its image this upcoming weekend.

    Lastly, try to imagine it the way you'd design it, and hopefully that'll help you see where this is going. lol ;) Anyhow, I gotta go, later
     
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  2. Colleen

    Colleen Illustrious Member

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    #22
    It sounds to me like you don't need any advice then and are just here to promote the site. :rolleyes: You seem to already have all the answers, and what are we reviewing anyway? A bunch of text?

    Post again when there is actually a "site" to review. Then we'd all be happy to tell you our thoughts.

    ps. I think wwhhomes was just being nice :D
     
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  3. DarrenC

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    #23
    Well my feedback was based on a site which appeared to be my someone who was new to webdesign, since you've mentioned you have 10 years experience my feedback would be trash it, buy a HTML book and start again :)
     
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    Colleen Illustrious Member

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    #24
    Yes, since he said "I can throw out a design that'll make u jump outta your seat" I am thinking he's just getting us there now for the sake of getting us there, I don't know how we can give much of a helpful review to just a bunch of text. :confused:
     
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    #25
    Yup well it took me 3 yrs to complete my site design so I suck :D
     
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  6. donelle8

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    #26
    Exactly, why not wait until the site is something to JUMP OUTTA YOUR SEATS about before you ask people to visit it and review it. It seems to me you didn't want people's opinions because you seem to know so much with 10 years of experience and wasn't taking the opinions of others very constructively. People don't know your background and by looking at the site the way it is, you would assume that the person who created the site doesn't really know all that much about what they are doing.
    Just my two cents... :confused:
     
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    #27
    Same message"

    Sorry, but the page or the file that you're looking for is not here.
    • Please check to see that you've entered the correct URL.
    • The owner of this site may have chosen to delete their membership.
    • The site may have been removed due to a violation of Tripod's Terms of Service.
    • The site may have been moved to a different URL.


    "
     
    ezest, Jun 15, 2005 IP
  8. isaiasd2003

    isaiasd2003 Guest

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    #28
    ok, I apologize for wanting it reviewed so soon lol. :cool:
     
    isaiasd2003, Jun 15, 2005 IP
  9. isaiasd2003

    isaiasd2003 Guest

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    #29
    WHAT url are using? :confused:
     
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  10. Intsecure

    Intsecure Peon

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    #30
    So basically this program is saving log files of all the information on your computer......so your infecting yourself with a virus and if a hacker gets on your computer he has access to all this information. I would suggest you post some screenshots and explain how this is a safe program to use for parents providing you keep all this information safe. You also have a spelling mistake you spelled atleast as atlease.

    This program can be good providing you explain how it works like do you require a password to use the program to ensure data safety, does the program run in the background, how much support does it come with, etc. Going over the product specs would help greatly.

    Hope everything works out ok seems like your getting alot of great feedback
     
    Intsecure, Jun 16, 2005 IP
  11. debunked

    debunked Prominent Member

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    #31
    no page there according to tripod
     
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  12. Audrey the Editor

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    #32
    At least is really two words.
     
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  13. isaiasd2003

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    #33
    Yeah, I thought about it. Wasn't sure if that'd be flooding the site with too much info though, I'll see what I can do. Thanks :D
     
    isaiasd2003, Jun 22, 2005 IP
  14. isaiasd2003

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    #34
    Hey, I'm curious where on the page is that? I'm trying to spot it, but I'm not sure where exactly "atlease" is so I can correct it. lol Thanks
     
    isaiasd2003, Jun 22, 2005 IP
  15. Audrey the Editor

    Audrey the Editor Peon

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    #35
    Sorry, I can't seem to access the page any longer. I've waited three minutes for the link to load and still have nothing so I can't tell you exactly where I saw atleast.

    Is this the correct URL?
    http://spy-software.tripod.com/
     
    Audrey the Editor, Jun 23, 2005 IP
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  17. Audrey the Editor

    Audrey the Editor Peon

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    #37
    This doesn't look like the page I saw before. This page <http://spy-software-spy.tripod.com>has several errors and some things I would definitely word differently. Do you want comments on the wording on http://spy-software-spy.tripod.com or not?
     
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    #38
    The website looks good!
     
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    #39
    Sure, and those two sites are different, http://spy-software.tripod.com should work, I'm not quite sure why it hasn't worked for you. What browser do you use? Have you tried opening it in another window?
     
    isaiasd2003, Jul 8, 2005 IP
  20. Audrey the Editor

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    #40
    These comments are on http://spy-software-spy.tripod.com/

    I can afford to make only three comments per page in a forum or I'd be editing for free alll day.

    So here are your three

    Change "your the spy!" to you're the spy!

    RE: " Does it have anything damaging to the pc?" Pronouns are tricky on the Web. People skim instead of reading. In this case, the word "it" doesn't have a clear reference. Yes, a person could work out the meaning, but with seconds to draw in your visitor, you don't want to confuse her at all.

    Change "you may have a good chance at being" to you may have a good chance of being

    Hope that helps.
     
    Audrey the Editor, Jul 9, 2005 IP