Review my new site! Check it out, click here. NOTE: It doesn't yet have template crap, cause its a pain in the a$$. Primary purpose of this site is to inform and sell anyway, which I have.
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If you want to inform and sell you're going to have to put some effort into the design. JMO. I don't care how simple you want to keep it, just try and make it look a little bit professional.
All I see is black text on white background... initial impression I'd just close it and move on. Too much text to just sit and read is what it screams at me. Average attention span of a web visitor is 10 seconds... if you don't grab them in that time you probably won't see them again.
I agree with the above two, it's not something that I would want to look at twice. Only because there is no structure or design of any kind. If you're going to post text like that, at least make it in newsletter form or something to give it at least a basic design.
Hello, First of all, IE could not open the page at all even after two tries. I got it open in Safari. Please do not use all bold. It's a waste of a style that should be used to highlight important information. Centered text is hard to read. You also have some very pale text lower on your page. Not many people are going to bother reading that. Your change of font is distracting. At the bottom you have links on offer in case the visitor doesn't like your content. That gave me the impression that you didn't like your content. Why would I come to your site looking for spy stuff and then go to a real estate site? I'd replace that with a google search box at the very least.
Get rid of bold letters. Is to heavy and exhausting to read. And the logo is also too dark. Make some changes to see it again.
You really need a site design for us to judge, other than that, I am sure it will be a good site, just stick all that info into a design, even a free template would be better than nothing for now.
The site is not very pleasing to visit. If i clicked on your site, i would most likely leave without even checking it out. You need to put "some" focus on design and go from there.
IS BECAUSE CUSTOMERS REQUESTED IT. THEY CLAIM TO NOT BE ABLE TO READ IT. Not my fault people have bad eye site, but after I changed it, I got sales. I also topped out in google after that.
IS ALSO BECAUSE CUSTOMERS REQUESTED IT. THEY CLAIM TO NOT BE ABLE TO READ IT. Not my fault people have bad eye site, but after I changed it, I got sales. I also topped out in google after that. Well, I changed it anyhow, just to see how that opts my site.
I see you changed the logo. Is much better than the black one. I suggest to try not to wrap the text on the entire screen. In 800x600 look better but think about 1024 or 1152 wide desktops. Right side looks empty. Put the text in the center in focus.
From a quick glance my recommended improvements would be; Navigation - I got lost in text Font size - Keep it all the same Font colour - As above, with the exception of links Content - Too much text for one page Graphics - Use a few graphics to draw peoples attention Domain - Get your own domain and hosting space (it's not as expensive as you might think! Hope this helps Darren