Review my new business site

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by moonswamp, Jan 21, 2011.

  1. DeathSpank

    DeathSpank Peon

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    #21
    good business
     
    DeathSpank, Jan 29, 2011 IP
  2. holmie

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    #22
    Nice site, I would look at your grammer in this paragraph (not that I'm an expert): We are specialized as E-Cigarette manufacturer and supplier, we provide all kind of eletronic cigarette products with wholesale price! E-cig is very popular these days cos the healthy smoking style, we have found a professional team who can design and manufactur all kinds of outstanding E-cigarettes according to your demands! I would put an "an" between as and E-cigarette. Maybe put a s on the end of kind. Turn price to prices. "because it is a healthy smoking style" might sound a little smoother. You could make complete sentences by removing the commas and putting in a period. Hope this helps.
     
    holmie, Jan 30, 2011 IP
  3. pcxp@live.com

    pcxp@live.com Well-Known Member

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    #23
    Good job, Great graphics.
     
    pcxp@live.com, Feb 2, 2011 IP
  4. accountsell

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    #24
    I like the design ,nice layout
     
    accountsell, Feb 4, 2011 IP