Review my new blog

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    Hilmi iraaS, Jun 1, 2011 IP
  2. XpressThemes

    XpressThemes Peon

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    #2
    I have read some of the articles there and they are really good, professionally researched and I found them useful, as many people will. But, try to find (or make) some custom theme which is more colored and cleaner. It's a bit hard to navigate there. Just correct that and your blog will be great. At this moment "+" for content, "-" for look. Good luck :)
     
    XpressThemes, Jun 2, 2011 IP
  3. gb-translation

    gb-translation Member

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    #3
    Alright, what about some pictures?
     
    gb-translation, Jun 2, 2011 IP
  4. gees7

    gees7 Well-Known Member

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    You blog is quite impressive; rich in informative content and worth reading. It has helped me in writing my own resume.
    I would like to suggest one thing- you can include some of the examples or sample resume along with the theory part.
     
    gees7, Jun 2, 2011 IP
  5. goldensun

    goldensun Peon

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    #5
    Seems to take a very long time to load a page.
    I agree that it needs more images to break up the wall of text.
     
    goldensun, Jun 2, 2011 IP
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    XTraitX Greenhorn

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    #6
    PR2 not a bad site dear. keep it up
     
    XTraitX, Jun 2, 2011 IP
  7. Hilmi iraaS

    Hilmi iraaS Peon

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    #7
    Thanks all for suggestion.
     
    Hilmi iraaS, Jun 3, 2011 IP
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    onlineseos Peon

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    #8
    Well my friend the thing I point out at yours domain; full of copy content!
     
    onlineseos, Jun 4, 2011 IP
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    Zipdaddy Active Member

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    #9
    I think the green / black scheme makes it look authoritative, but I would consider changing the green to a value a little more "green"... this green looks a little dull.
    I agree that a picture or two would give a little extra "oomph" to the site.

    Overall there is plenty of good content, and visitors will see the value of the information you provide, and will most likely recommend to friends and acquaintances.

    Good Job!
     
    Zipdaddy, Jun 4, 2011 IP
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    #10
    good job brother.... keep fighting
     
    harisbillah, Jun 7, 2011 IP
  11. sarahmiller

    sarahmiller Guest

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    #11
    put same picture into your blog to make your blog alive
     
    sarahmiller, Jun 7, 2011 IP
  12. ohio_health_insurance

    ohio_health_insurance Peon

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    #12
    Ok. I took about 5 minutes or so to go through your blog and let me put forward my frank opinion.

    Positive Aspects

    + Your blog is extensively informative
    + Clear and Simple Language
    + Descriptive writing style (much like you are talking to a person directly...thats good)
    + Good Tags (But add some more like: business resume, professional resume, job resume, IT resume, corporate resume.... etc)
    + Subtitle is Apt but grammar is wrong (The correct sentence would be: Know How to Write a Resume)

    Aspects Lacking (Not Negative but Needed)

    - Comment column (almost all blogs have one but not in your case)
    - Reader Syndrome (Though your blog is largely informative, it takes some time to read. These days most people dont have time on their hands so you need to cut down wherever possible and use Bullet points instead. This allows people to 'scan through your content')
    - Content Related Pictures (Others have already mentioned that and so have I. A few catch pictures will liven your blog.)

    That's all I got to say. I hope I have not offended you in anyway. Please take all in good measure.

    Best of Luck and keep up the good work.
     
    ohio_health_insurance, Jun 7, 2011 IP
  13. mrcodealot

    mrcodealot Peon

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    #13
    It is nice. Perhaps you would write abstract and summary for each article. These articles are a bit long for impatient online readers.
     
    mrcodealot, Jun 8, 2011 IP
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    kaltechsolutions Peon

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    #15
    good work dear...!!
     
    nikipatel, Jun 9, 2011 IP
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    tufei Active Member

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    #16
    It is nice,but take a long time to load your web
     
    tufei, Jun 9, 2011 IP
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    #17
    I agree with XpressThemes,make the blog your own by choosing a customised theme,otherwise great job at a simplistic and intuitive layout.
     
    cheapinmadrid, Jun 9, 2011 IP
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    #18
    You have PR 2? How long did that take you?
     
    gb-translation, Jul 13, 2011 IP
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    #19
    I have read some of the articles there and they are really good,
     
    habiba, Jul 13, 2011 IP
  20. aPersonal-Development

    aPersonal-Development Peon

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    #20
    Congrats Hilmi! This is really a nice career blog.

    My suggestions:
    - use a theme with less text and more pictures
    - select some of your content and turn it into a white-paper or eBook, it helps in spreading your knowledge and bringing visitors to your site

    Keep going with the great work!

    frank
     
    aPersonal-Development, Jul 13, 2011 IP